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1. …the one who made her laugh desperately and made her feel beautiful, needed, and special, the one who loved her as madly and desperately as she loved him.

(Personal preference?) Desperately appears twice in this sentence.

2. …deep and dark and weighed with memories…

I believe this should be weighted instead of weighed.

3. …that seemed simultaneously ancient and brand:…

Should be brand-new instead of brand.

(I’m worried David is driving to find Olivia and they’ll miss each other! But what else can she do?)

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