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…were attracted to electric stimulus.

I would say “…were attracted to electrical stimuli.”

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…to generate a natural Faraday Cage.

I believe “cage” should not be capitalized. This occurs twice in this chapter.

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…such as the radiated skim from a…

“radiated skim”? I’m not familiar with this phrase, not sure what you’re trying to say.

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But it was more than just lightning bolts far out over the water that were causing the random anomalies to appear.

Maybe just personal preference but I feel like “it was more” is singular here so it would be “…that was causing…” Maybe if you said “…there were more…” it would match with “were” in the second half of the sentence.

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