Minor nits... second paragraph... I think it's more correct to use
arrival *at* work,
--instead of--
arrival *to* work.
(you can travel *to*, but you arrive *at* ... work)
Also, I would put a comma after morning in this sentence: "Upon arrival at work that first morning, they were ..." I'm not sure if Grammarly agrees with me on that one or not. But it definitely makes it easier to read, and seems more correct (to me).
1. …or risk running into her co-workers who would surely be convening at Einstein’s Tavern just down the corner from ENH.
May I suggest “just around the corner from ENH.” or “just down the street from ENH”
2. Dr. Tabitha Smalls: should be Small
Fixed the corner. Actually tweaked the conversation about Small vs Smalls.
Minor nits... second paragraph... I think it's more correct to use
arrival *at* work,
--instead of--
arrival *to* work.
(you can travel *to*, but you arrive *at* ... work)
Also, I would put a comma after morning in this sentence: "Upon arrival at work that first morning, they were ..." I'm not sure if Grammarly agrees with me on that one or not. But it definitely makes it easier to read, and seems more correct (to me).
Finally fixed these, too.