As Becca left the podium, for some odd reason Dr. Sam Hollander was reminded of employee orientation with Drake at the start of their tenure with ENH. Upon arrival at work that first morning, they were immediately escorted to a windowless room with a single rectangular fluorescent light that barely lit the space. It was a tiny square box that could have easily been nothing more than a storage closet and was most likely originally designed for that purpose. Whiteboards hung on all four walls, each with a scattering of markers and erasers cluttering trays at the bottom of each board. A video monitor was mounted next to the doorway with its power cord dangling, unattached to an outlet. Against the front wall were several black rolling office chairs that faced the single flimsy table that was set up in the center of the room. Behind the table were two uncomfortable folding chairs set up facing the entrance to the room. Sam and Drake were instructed to sit there.
Minor nits... second paragraph... I think it's more correct to use
arrival *at* work,
--instead of--
arrival *to* work.
(you can travel *to*, but you arrive *at* ... work)
Also, I would put a comma after morning in this sentence: "Upon arrival at work that first morning, they were ..." I'm not sure if Grammarly agrees with me on that one or not. But it definitely makes it easier to read, and seems more correct (to me).
1. …or risk running into her co-workers who would surely be convening at Einstein’s Tavern just down the corner from ENH.
May I suggest “just around the corner from ENH.” or “just down the street from ENH”
2. Dr. Tabitha Smalls: should be Small
Fixed the corner. Actually tweaked the conversation about Small vs Smalls.
Minor nits... second paragraph... I think it's more correct to use
arrival *at* work,
--instead of--
arrival *to* work.
(you can travel *to*, but you arrive *at* ... work)
Also, I would put a comma after morning in this sentence: "Upon arrival at work that first morning, they were ..." I'm not sure if Grammarly agrees with me on that one or not. But it definitely makes it easier to read, and seems more correct (to me).
Finally fixed these, too.