“Long Range LaGrange done did again, boy, I tell you what!” Jeremy’s bunkmate hooted upon entering their quarters. It was just after dawn and Ethan Rodriguez glistened, soaked with sweat, his undershirt stuck to his skin. He was all high energy and emotion. It radiated off him like a fever from the events of that night.
Did you mean sight?
"The site of Mark at that moment made Jeremy shiver."
I love this chapter! Very emotional. I had forgotten at first about the kayaking accident and then it hit me. That chapter ending, yikes!
1. …even during the year after Jeremy graduated high school as he… [should be graduated from high school]
2. …for her own parent’s printing company… [should be parents’]
3. The second summer after he graduated high school,… [again, graduated from high school]
4. …their parent’s alma mater. [again, parents’]
5. “Obviously they got that wrong,” said Rose. [should be Rosie]
Excited for a new chapter. Not what I expected based on previous chapters. Can’t wait for the next one!