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Greg Willits's avatar

By the way, for those of you keeping up with the chapters, I already have next week's edited and ready to go. Part II begins!

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Lisa's avatar

Great suspense! I only have one suggestion this week:

Sam’s head slumped over against the window again and closed his eyes.

... and he closed his eyes.

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