“She’s not answering,” Frankie said.
By the way, for those of you keeping up with the chapters, I already have next week's edited and ready to go. Part II begins!
Great suspense! I only have one suggestion this week:
Sam’s head slumped over against the window again and closed his eyes.
... and he closed his eyes.
Another good chapter!
This feels awkward. this woman. She’s something.”
Should it be woman, she’s something?
Yeah, kinda weird. Tweaked it. Thanks!
By the way, for those of you keeping up with the chapters, I already have next week's edited and ready to go. Part II begins!
Great suspense! I only have one suggestion this week:
Sam’s head slumped over against the window again and closed his eyes.
... and he closed his eyes.
Another good chapter!
This feels awkward. this woman. She’s something.”
Should it be woman, she’s something?
Yeah, kinda weird. Tweaked it. Thanks!