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Love the 80s references... big hair and shoulder pads! 😆

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The magnificent and awe-inspiring site of the World Trade Center’s mammoth twin towers stood like towering unmovable monoliths above the New York skyline.

This sentence sounds like “the site stood like... monoliths...” May I suggest:

...site of the World Trade Center’s mammoth twin towers, standing like towering unmovable monoliths above the New York skyline.

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