The thin black man, Dr. Adrian Parsons, couldn’t stop shuffling his hands. He nervously interlocked his long, bony fingers and then stretched them out again. They were like foreign objects he couldn’t stop touching. He stroked the knuckles on the top of each hand.
I would have never thought about bringing the ‘main’ clock into the story (and I don’t remember the name before it was the atomic clock so interesting opportunity to learn a new thing too). Cool twist! I like the summary of how different peoples memories are now - using the news desk format was a great idea.
1. to repeat what we’ve learned last few hours
…learned in the last few…
2. more than a scattering sample of the population
…more than a scattered sample…
3. Dr. Parsons’s
I would be inclined to write it: Dr. Parsons’
I, too, like the TV interview format. Very creative!
I would have never thought about bringing the ‘main’ clock into the story (and I don’t remember the name before it was the atomic clock so interesting opportunity to learn a new thing too). Cool twist! I like the summary of how different peoples memories are now - using the news desk format was a great idea.