I would have never thought about bringing the ‘main’ clock into the story (and I don’t remember the name before it was the atomic clock so interesting opportunity to learn a new thing too). Cool twist! I like the summary of how different peoples memories are now - using the news desk format was a great idea.
1. to repeat what we’ve learned last few hours
…learned in the last few…
2. more than a scattering sample of the population
…more than a scattered sample…
3. Dr. Parsons’s
I would be inclined to write it: Dr. Parsons’
I, too, like the TV interview format. Very creative!
I would have never thought about bringing the ‘main’ clock into the story (and I don’t remember the name before it was the atomic clock so interesting opportunity to learn a new thing too). Cool twist! I like the summary of how different peoples memories are now - using the news desk format was a great idea.