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1. to repeat what we’ve learned last few hours

…learned in the last few…

2. more than a scattering sample of the population

…more than a scattered sample…

3. Dr. Parsons’s

I would be inclined to write it: Dr. Parsons’

I, too, like the TV interview format. Very creative!

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I would have never thought about bringing the ‘main’ clock into the story (and I don’t remember the name before it was the atomic clock so interesting opportunity to learn a new thing too). Cool twist! I like the summary of how different peoples memories are now - using the news desk format was a great idea.

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