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1. The clarity of it all was so clear

To me, this sounds awkward: clarity is clear?

2. commiserated with whatever so-called experts

I believe this should be whichever instead of whatever

3. As they pontificated various theories

I believe pontificate does not take an object so you should say “As they pontificated about various theories…”

4. Ten-years-old.

No hyphens, should be: Ten years old.

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Another great chapter. I can’t wait to find out how long it takes to get the news to believe her.

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