Though she fit once more into her original sixteen-year-old body, wearing it like an old suit, with thin bony arms, a sharp angular jawline, and a face void of wrinkles, Olivia felt empty.
Nicely written (I have no recommended changes!)!
Only took 30 chapters to get one without a typo!
Nicely written (I have no recommended changes!)!
Only took 30 chapters to get one without a typo!