The girl in the boat was drenched from bleeding.
Well. That is such a fascinating concept…everyone time traveling gives the advantage to no one. This is a heart pounding chapter, I like it. I found only one typo:
“What the hell? Jeremy called out, sputtering.
Missing end quotation mark.
Well. That is such a fascinating concept…everyone time traveling gives the advantage to no one. This is a heart pounding chapter, I like it. I found only one typo:
“What the hell? Jeremy called out, sputtering.
Missing end quotation mark.