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Lisa's avatar

1. “It’s a site, ain’t it?” a voice asked behind him.

I believe it should be sight.

2. Charlie suddenly exclaimed and pointed excitedly towards the distance.

To me, this sounds better: “...pointed excitedly into the distance.”

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Greg's avatar

Misspelling. Fort Zachary Taylor, not Tailor.

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Greg Willits's avatar

Some typos bug me more than others. That one really bugs me. Good catch. Thanks!

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