PART III - PUSH AND PULL
1. “It’s a site, ain’t it?” a voice asked behind him.
I believe it should be sight.
2. Charlie suddenly exclaimed and pointed excitedly towards the distance.
To me, this sounds better: “...pointed excitedly into the distance.”
Misspelling. Fort Zachary Taylor, not Tailor.
Some typos bug me more than others. That one really bugs me. Good catch. Thanks!
1. “It’s a site, ain’t it?” a voice asked behind him.
I believe it should be sight.
2. Charlie suddenly exclaimed and pointed excitedly towards the distance.
To me, this sounds better: “...pointed excitedly into the distance.”
Misspelling. Fort Zachary Taylor, not Tailor.
Some typos bug me more than others. That one really bugs me. Good catch. Thanks!