The bustling emergency room was filled with far more patients than medical staff. Frankie was crammed into the corner of an overcrowded examination room and hastily stitched up by an angry nurse who persistently mumbled a litany of grievances as she jittered around.
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On the television, the camera zoomed in the terrifying frenzy of the stampeding crowds as onlookers scrambled…
Should it be: …zoomed in on the terrifying frenzy…