PART IV - SEEKING BEFORE
1.
“David?” she cried
Missing period at the end of the sentence.
2.
In their parent’s house in North Carolina,…
Should be “parents’ house…”
(My fears might be coming true, David and Olivia heading toward each other and missing each other!)
1.
“David?” she cried
Missing period at the end of the sentence.
2.
In their parent’s house in North Carolina,…
Should be “parents’ house…”
(My fears might be coming true, David and Olivia heading toward each other and missing each other!)