Dr Watts twice, I'm a bit confused.... But that's nothing new.
So you were truly here, then?” James asked. “I mean, here at ENH? I must have misunderstood something, then. I knew Tabitha and Dr. Watts were here, and Dr. Watts. But what were you doing here, exactly?”
Dr Watts twice, I'm a bit confused.... But that's nothing new.
So you were truly here, then?” James asked. “I mean, here at ENH? I must have misunderstood something, then. I knew Tabitha and Dr. Watts were here, and Dr. Watts. But what were you doing here, exactly?”
1.
“So what’s about all this?” Tony asked, waving his hands at the flickering lights around them.
To me, “So what’s this all about?” sounds better.
2.
Looking up, Tabithat and James met each other’s eyes and smiled.
Tabitha is misspelled.
3.
Olivia slapped her forehead as she understood James’ panic…
You are using two different possessive forms of James. Here you have “James’” and earlier you used “James’s.”