PART V - NOW AND THEN
1.
…as an eighteen wheeled semi…
I would suggest hyphenating: “…eighteen-wheeled semi…”
2.
…of cruising into horizons so far into the distance…
Maybe personal preference but “cruising into horizons” doesn’t make sense to me. May I suggest:
…of cruising toward horizons so far into the distance…
3.
Yellow pages…white pages
I believe both of these should be capitalized:
Yellow Pages
White Pages
1.
…as an eighteen wheeled semi…
I would suggest hyphenating: “…eighteen-wheeled semi…”
2.
…of cruising into horizons so far into the distance…
Maybe personal preference but “cruising into horizons” doesn’t make sense to me. May I suggest:
…of cruising toward horizons so far into the distance…
3.
Yellow pages…white pages
I believe both of these should be capitalized:
Yellow Pages
White Pages