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Evelyn Wojtkowiak's avatar

"Frustration scrawled across his brown in a deep line, ". Brow instead of brown?

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Frustration scrawled across his brown in a…

“brow” not “brown”

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Not necessarily,” Tabitha said.

Missing opening quotation mark.

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