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“We have — had, I guess - two dogs,”…

Mismatched dashes.

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“And guess who had to take care of them since Becca was always consumed, as you say?” Frankie said,…

I would put a comma in place of the question mark. This seems to me to be a statement rather than a question. (I don’t hear a rise in intonation at the end, as a question mark would indicate.)

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