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Lisa's avatar

1. Two brothers setting flight in …taking flight?

2. “As you all know,” she repeated. “This has been a…

should be:

…she repeated, “this has…

3. Hallander should be Hollander

4. “The problem is that until now,” Becca continued, “We’ve been unable…

should be:

…“we’ve been unable…

5. “As you know,” Becca continued. “Using exact temperature controls…

should be:

…Becca continued, “using…

6. “…So tomorrow we begin twelve-hour shifts by teams, eight to eight, seven days a week, at least for the foreseeable future.

Missing end quote after future.

7. Tabitha Smalls should be Small

By the way, even though I’m finding several typos, I am thoroughly enjoying your book! Thanks for the opportunity to read it AND edit (both are fun)!

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Matthew Marks's avatar

Should quantic mechanics be quantum mechanics? Or is this a sci-fi term you're using for this book?

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