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Yes I did enjoy this chapter very much. It was hard to read and emotionally fraught, compelling. Interesting twist with her teacher’s fate. My suggestions:

1. “You got nearly doubt that out of her,” Grace remembered.

I believe you meant “double”.

2. A half mile further down the road they turned left onto fourteenth

I believe Fourteenth should be capitalized since it’s the name of the street.

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