There's an interesting phenomenon in fiction, when one chapter ends and another begins with a new POV (different characters). I start the chapter thinking, "Wait, I want to read more about Frankie and Becca! Who are these guys?" But then by the end of the chapter, I don't want to leave David and Jeremy. I don't know how authors do it, but you nailed it with this chapter. Well done.
There's an interesting phenomenon in fiction, when one chapter ends and another begins with a new POV (different characters). I start the chapter thinking, "Wait, I want to read more about Frankie and Becca! Who are these guys?" But then by the end of the chapter, I don't want to leave David and Jeremy. I don't know how authors do it, but you nailed it with this chapter. Well done.
So glad you're enjoying it, Matthew! Thanks for the encouragement :)
Love the pace so far, can’t wait to see how they get out of this.
What’s going to happen next?!?!?!