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Greg, you need a period at the end of the paragraph that starts with "Marie would talk about the various themes of movies..."

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Good catch!

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"Back then he wasn’t even aware of theater’s discomforts." Should it be "the theater's discomforts."?

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Hmm. Yeah, I think you're right. Of course, now that it's been a few weeks since I edited that chapter, when I look at that sentence, it's kind of weird. Alas. I added a The. Thanks!

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I goof up on this one all the time. Thanks!

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