Once again, Gordon was balancing his checkbook on a Friday night. With each passing year, and each passing decade, the meaninglessness of Fridays had worsened as it was filled with the same repetitive drudgeries: Discount tuna fish on plain white bread. A handful of carrot sticks on disposable — but reused nevertheless — paper plates.
Hmm. Yeah, I think you're right. Of course, now that it's been a few weeks since I edited that chapter, when I look at that sentence, it's kind of weird. Alas. I added a The. Thanks!
Greg, you need a period at the end of the paragraph that starts with "Marie would talk about the various themes of movies..."
Good catch!
"Back then he wasn’t even aware of theater’s discomforts." Should it be "the theater's discomforts."?
Hmm. Yeah, I think you're right. Of course, now that it's been a few weeks since I edited that chapter, when I look at that sentence, it's kind of weird. Alas. I added a The. Thanks!
I goof up on this one all the time. Thanks!